Sample of an Evaluation of an Assessment
Based on EntreBahn's C.A.R.E. criteria, this sample evaluation has given the expert a low score. Note that the objective reasons for the low ratings are presented. One result of this evaluation is the expert's score will be lowered, affecting their ability to be selected for future assessments.
This is one of the ways that EntreBahn ensures the quality of assessments by its experts is maintained and improved.
Overall evaluation notes
You indicated that you did not understand what I was selling and repeated that three times. A strategy for dealing with submissions like mine is to assume you know that I am selling a service or product. Tell the client that this is an assumption you needed to make, although the target audience for the submission may not make the same assumption. Then comment on the success or failure of using this pitch to promote my service or product.
Also, note that you can comment on this evaluation to address any of the issues that I have raised.
|Clearly written and understandable
You indicated that you did not understand what I was selling and repeated that three times. A strategy for dealing with submissions like mine is to assume you know what I am selling a service and then comment on the success or failure of using this pitch to promote my service or product. It is hard to say that a series of sentences that repeat themselves, or that have one word in them lacks clarity, but it does.
|Applicable information to this type of material in general
There was almost no useful information in this Assessment. There was no advice on how to clarify the service/product being sold, where the grammar errors were, or how the tag line fit into the submission.
|Relevant to specific submission
This was an Assessment without specifics. What was it that you did not understand? Was it the service, the market, or the parties involved? Also, what tagline are you referring to -- I did not know the submission included any part of my tag line?
|Executable - is advice actionable and gives some idea of what to do next and possibly how to do it
There is nothing actionable in the assessment. There were no how-tos, specific recommendations, or directions on where to go to fix the issues you felt needed addressing.
Overall evaluation score: 16%